Thursday, 2 July 2015

one day in the jrasick wold two boys got talipotd into you wate ther. Nams wer joe and liam they taley potd into a karv nex to a vizges .Fool fo stopd kavmen we bebnt wont to go ther. Lam siad i mess Tv joe sade i
mess miy ftone and we both skrimd NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.
We fand spers we went hanting dinos we fawnd a herd of stega moleke
we killd 10.joe sarted the fiyr liam cokt them we had binr.In the moning two
saber toth tigr we got up we got are spirs they wer hard to hit bicause they
wer relly fast it was anoying to we finley  got them.Ther was a grop of
Kavmen we wer runing to the so we got siks and end of them  and got
back the kavman bat they wer amasd they went back to the velgs it was anoying
wen they kame.Then we sore a t rexwe we triyd to get in to the kav the intrens was
kavd in fiar. Joe sar the lack joe sar a pess of barck we kod yous for a bact joe ran
down the path joe sabe kame on liam get wotr we went back to the kav and
pot out the feyr the t rex was cameing up the path we went in to the kav we wer safe for naw.

By Joe and Liam

2 comments:

  1. AWESOME SORTY

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  2. Wow Joe and Liam what a great story. It was packed full of suspense and nail biting adventures. I hope there are more adventures to read in the future!

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